Afterglow Comments

touched by the beautiful depiction of fears that we carry inside, the life goals we set and how we go astray...

Nice subject matter, try writing it as an ottava rima poem, it would look good. (Google ottava rima) . Good ink.

Thank you for this poem.

Thank you for posting this.

Hope you are tempered with desire to keep writing

This is fine work, you say everything you need, and it flows really well.

Good writing, different style/keep writing and thank you.