Wednesday, November 25, 2009

Afterglow Comments

Rating: 5.0

We grope and itch in our tumble,
searing the void with passion true
until my flesh throbs most humble
to stain my brain away from blue.
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John Weber
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Ro'ya Abdulaal 25 November 2009

wow, this is simply awesome, I loved the idea, the smoothly flowing words and the convincing tone, stanzas 3 and 5 are my top favorite, well done, you are really good

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