IImbricated clouds cloaks blasted sunset
Brings memories of yesteryears
Glorious past flashes back on set
Gives my first vision, tears
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I’d like to see…. Many such afterglows! Please O’ you! Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv
And when the juju sunset comes, The eccentric afterglow welcomes These fondly reveries in life is all done Cannot be redux nor undone These are the lines that i cannot forget.I simply adore these. And here is the gifted poet that God gave in the early morn, and hopefully will continue in every sunset that comes. Wow..i think, i have found the real one..the REAL POET here in PH. And was i glad and proud that i have fellow Boholano here..so talented. I tip my hat...a toss for you, Sir.. God bless you..Shalom.. Hugs, Meggie
A well written piece in my opinion. Very touching, and a good rhyme scheme. It makes me think about my past and things that will never change and snapshots (good and bad) that will stay with me forever. A great poem. You should be proud of your skill and knowledge. =} keep up the great work. I am always reading and absorbing.
'And when the juju sunset comes, The eccentric afterglow welcomes These fondly reveries in life is all done Cannot be redux nor undone' I like these lines sir.... and you know what while these lines are so free flowing and well composed.... these lines reflect what a great person you are..... nice indeed... with loves shan
slowly and surely you turn the attention to the inevitable...building your beautiful lie/case bit by bit its a sensitive and beautiful poetry very well done indeed cheers and ten
And when the juju sunset comes, The eccentric afterglow welcomes These fondly reveries in life is all done Cannot be redux nor undone Beautiful poem, Noel. Afterglow of memories have a magic like juju too......10.
The memoirs of after glow left lessons, footprints and ashes.......lovely one! ! ! 10+++++++++
dear, sometimes failures come unnoticed...but after awhile, it is fixed..success and contentment in life takes place..lavs it dear...cheers..
yeah wonderful write. packed with feelings and emotios. voted 10 surya
this sir, is amazingly written..... passionate.... it evoked care in my heart.
fantastic write...... and very nice to read...............