Thursday, July 23, 2009

Afterglow Comments

Rating: 5.0

IImbricated clouds cloaks blasted sunset
Brings memories of yesteryears
Glorious past flashes back on set
Gives my first vision, tears
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rago rago 17 November 2009

fantastic write...... and very nice to read...............

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 October 2009

I’d like to see…. Many such afterglows! Please O’ you! Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv

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Meggie Gultiano 06 August 2009

And when the juju sunset comes, The eccentric afterglow welcomes These fondly reveries in life is all done Cannot be redux nor undone These are the lines that i cannot forget.I simply adore these. And here is the gifted poet that God gave in the early morn, and hopefully will continue in every sunset that comes. Wow..i think, i have found the real one..the REAL POET here in PH. And was i glad and proud that i have fellow Boholano here..so talented. I tip my hat...a toss for you, Sir.. God bless you..Shalom.. Hugs, Meggie

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Shyana Keajls 05 August 2009

A well written piece in my opinion. Very touching, and a good rhyme scheme. It makes me think about my past and things that will never change and snapshots (good and bad) that will stay with me forever. A great poem. You should be proud of your skill and knowledge. =} keep up the great work. I am always reading and absorbing.

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Siddharth Singh 05 August 2009

Its a lovely look back down the memory lane.

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Ency Bearis 03 August 2009

a good imagery write....a wonderful poem and nice to read...10

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Trade Martin 29 July 2009

Fine work my friend. Enjoyed it. Regards, Trade.

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Shashendra Amalshan 29 July 2009

'And when the juju sunset comes, The eccentric afterglow welcomes These fondly reveries in life is all done Cannot be redux nor undone' I like these lines sir.... and you know what while these lines are so free flowing and well composed.... these lines reflect what a great person you are..... nice indeed... with loves shan

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Saadat Tahir 28 July 2009

slowly and surely you turn the attention to the inevitable...building your beautiful lie/case bit by bit its a sensitive and beautiful poetry very well done indeed cheers and ten

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 27 July 2009

And when the juju sunset comes, The eccentric afterglow welcomes These fondly reveries in life is all done Cannot be redux nor undone Beautiful poem, Noel. Afterglow of memories have a magic like juju too......10.

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Catrina Heart 24 July 2009

The memoirs of after glow left lessons, footprints and ashes.......lovely one! ! ! 10+++++++++

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Lady Grace 23 July 2009

dear, sometimes failures come unnoticed...but after awhile, it is fixed..success and contentment in life takes place..lavs it dear...cheers..

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Surya . 23 July 2009

yeah wonderful write. packed with feelings and emotios. voted 10 surya

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this sir, is amazingly written..... passionate.... it evoked care in my heart.

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Noel Horlanda

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