Thursday, January 13, 2005

Afterbirth Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mother woke me this morning,
her voice, a rattle of earth and worms-
it may not concern you, she is dead.
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Amberlee Carter
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Sathyanarayana M V S 01 October 2008

This is a heartfelt write..........full of sentiment and emotion and the tone of the poem well suited the subject

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Xxx Xxx 24 May 2008

this is unique and she lives in your blood, thanks

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John Tiong Chunghoo 06 July 2006

congrats amberlee, this is s very good one. cheers.

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Wade Greenway 28 June 2006

Incredible, powerful...haunting has been used but appropriate. Well done, Bravo!

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