After Your Leaving... Comments

lovely piece, Hazem...a paining heart sad, always turns eloquent...i especially liked your over weighing expression- 'a future became past'...thanks...10

what a lovely poem...i can relate very much...my body was numb for many months after i seperated from my ex partner...my body was wracked with grief...i lay curled up like a little big baby and wept night after night...it was the most horrific pain...but i have survived...and i am getting stronger...admitedly im still a little numb...still early days....

ooooooooooo i love it so much...and u know i really enjoy it so much

I think this is a very good poem i enjoy reading your poetry your very talented i hope you have a great week *Felicia*

Pain brings strength you never knew that existed within you. Good but sad verse. Love and best wishes suzan

I could feel the real pain - this poem is very vivid.

take carefull about heart loved you... I think you should put as take carefull about a heart loved you... Good poem though and loved the voice of pain for loosing their beloved

i really like this poem it's really beautiful. ^_^