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MOTHER'S CARE AND LOVE MAKES THE GARDEN GROW; AND IN HER ABSENCE ONLY WILD WEEDS SPROUT & GROW! -Raj

A vintage garden with simply stunning images, I can feel it all so close to your heart, especially when I came to the conclusion. Beautiful poetry. 10 love Karin

Ritti i just love your description of the garden and the flowers, so poetic and life like, ending it with somber heart about the loss of a brother and compassion for your mother.......Beautiful. It goes on my favourite list. Milica

The poem belongs to purely descriptive poetry, its goal consists of producing comprehensive beauties .There are used epithets like: ''wild flower'' and ''wild hyacinth'' and complex metaphors like: ''crocus bursts themselves out/at the touch of rain, /a splurge of yellow, /in the uncared lawn''.Obvious, the effect of these lines of color is wonderful...10++