After You Left -04 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

After You Left -04

Rating: 4.8


It is the place
Where we met first day.
The zigzag path
Leading to the hill side
Where you saved me that day.

As I was
On the verge of a slide.
A lone dry lane
Without you and me
Holding hands under the rain!


It is the place
Where we parted last day.
The meadows, green
With grasses of teen days' touch
Have grown older and thorny.
The bird's chirp with
A touch of dry, dark, agony.

The stones that chalk marked
Our erotic smile and laughter
Appear to have faded
Into a hollow soul-less slumber.

It is still there, like
A Sand less desert of pain
Soaking all the tears of youth
And smokes of memories burn
In the fire of days by gone.

Tuesday, May 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,love and friendship,nostalgia,separation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Sharma Rimi 29 August 2016

It is still there, like A Sand less desert of pain Soaking all the tears of youth And smokes of memories burn In the fire of days by gone. Beautiful poem. Simply lovely.10 for it. Keep it up.

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Alina Kaikeyi 08 November 2017

Yes Seema Didi, I loved this poem Didi, I agree with you.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 June 2016

The zigzag path! Nice work.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 December 2017

Thanks dear Poet, Thanks a lot for these nice remarks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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