Wednesday, May 11, 2016

After You Left -03 Comments

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The soil, the fluid, the breeze,
The Earth, The Oceans and the Sky
That floated in thy looks
All through, in thy eyes
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Seema Sharma Rimi 20 January 2018

Whose memories had been My life, In the heart Flooded with pleasure On the bed of the mind, In the dawn or dusk or noon In every darkness of my nights... Nice poem shared. 10++

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Thanks dear Rimi for the beautiful words of encouragement.

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Alina Kaikeyi 29 September 2017

At this very moment As it has been, Your image alive Is kissing the valley of my thoughts As I go on burning On the mirror of every moment Every day. Nice poem shared. 10++

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Alina, Thanks for the beautiful words of encouragement.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 22 May 2016

Whose memories had been My life, In the heart Flooded with pleasure On the bed of the mind, In the dawn or dusk or noon In every darkness of my nights... Beautiful poem, nice and lovely.

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Alina Kaikeyi 08 November 2017

loved this poem Didi, I agree with you.

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Sanjukta, Thanks for the beautiful words of encouragement.

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Anita Aparajita Das 17 May 2016

The soil, the fluid, the breeze, The Earth, The Oceans and the Sky That floated in thy looks All through, in thy eyes Every morning, Every evening... Whose memories had been My life, In the heart Flooded with pleasure On the bed of the mind, In the dawn or dusk or noon In every darkness of my nights... Oh you loved her so much? What a painstaking feeling...Loved it.10 out of 10.Thanks for the poem. Nitu

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Alina Kaikeyi 08 November 2017

At this very moment As it has been, Your image alive Is kissing the valley of my thoughts As I go on burning On the mirror of every moment Every day. I love this poem dear Anita Ma'am, unable to place my comment in the comment box, but it works here.

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Neetu, Thanks for the beautiful words of encouragement.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 12 May 2016

At this very momentAs it has been, Your image aliveIs kissing the valley of my thoughtsAs I go on burningOn the mirror of every momentEvery day. Really nice. Thanks for the poem Sir Ful l marks. Seema

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Alina Kaikeyi 08 November 2017

At this very moment As it has been, Your image alive Is kissing the valley of my thoughts As I go on burning On the mirror of every moment Every day. loved this poem Didi, I agree with you.

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Seema dear, Thanks for the beautiful words of encouragement.

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