After You Left -02 Comments

Flooded the green lawn of All my sweet dreams. Beautiful expression. Good poem

Clouds of hopelessness Blackened the sky of my heart The saline tides of separation Flooded the green lawn of All my sweet dreams. Nicely penned and shared. 10++

After you left It all became so empty. So lonely, So silent! The thin air around Caught fire, became violent. Clouds of hopelessness Blackened the sky of my heart You have delivered the pain of separation successfully. Nice to read. Thanks poet.

Clouds of hopelessness Blackened the sky of my heart The saline tides of separation Flooded the green lawn of All my sweet dreams. Beautiful expression. Good poem.

The saline tides of separationFlooded the green lawn ofAll my sweet dreams. I loved these lines.10 for this poem. Thanks. Seema