After You Left -01 Comments

A great poem. Thank you sir for sharing. 10++++++

A smoky cloud was Covering the distant valley, Blurring the vision, All your memories, at once, Were all invoked within me. Felt like flying up to there, Where this moment, you are. Would meet those eyes, hazel Through the blue curtains that fall. A beautiful poem of

My heart swelled to explode. As if, all of sudden Million tides rushed Into the banks of Our river of separation. Nice reading. Beautiful poem

A news- Secret yet frightening, Small yet devastating, It increased the beats- My heart swelled to explode. Nice poem shared. 10++

A smoky cloud was Covering the distant valley, Blurring the vision, All your memories, at once, Were all invoked within me. Felt like flying up to there, Where this moment, you are. Would meet those eyes, hazel Through the blue curtains that fall. Beautiful poem describing the pensive moments of a lover. Thanks for sharing the poem.

As if it whispered Something in my ears- A news- Secret yet frightening, Small yet devastating, It increased the beats- My heart swelled to explode. As if, all of sudden Million tides rushed Into the banks of Our river of separation. Nice reading. Beautiful poem.

A smoky cloud was Covering the distant valley, Blurring the vision, All your memories, at once, Were all invoked within me. Good poem. Thanks for sharing it.

There was a miracleThis morning! As the first sun shineTouched meAs if it whisperedSomething in my ears-A news-Secret yrt frightening, Small yet devastating, It increased the beats-My heart swelled to explode.As if, all of suddenMillion tides rushedInto the banks ofOur river of separation. Beautiful in every aspect Sir. I rate it for full marks. Thanks for the poem. seema