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Thanks for the kind comments about my poem. I took your advise and changed the title from 'God's Test' to 'I tested God' Later on, I'll make other changes. I think it might need to be separated into verses. Is that what you meant for arrangement? I'm open for constructive criticism. That's how we grow as poets. I love your poem. It's well written and flows very nice. I am going to read some more.

Very lovely. It happens each time a relationship is splintered. Memories don't leave you, they just buffer the ache. ps...thanks for your kind comments on my stuff...dave.

This poem is def something I would read again and again. I remember when a sudden death occurred feeling as though the whole world should stop, but it didn't, and even though I knew it wouldn't, I still thought it should, because my whole world did. It is very very good and I think most readers will relate well to there own circumstance. Thanks.

Okay... This is one of my favorites! ! I love that you write about God and all of his goodness. Great job! I'll be sure to come back so I can read more of your writings.