After You'D Gone Comments

This is really beautiful Laurie. well chosen words, exquisite imagery. Thank you for sharing.

This is incredibly touching! I can picture the scene and the emotions flowing in my heart and mind. Short, with great impact! I so love this, thanks! :)

You set the stage amazingly in the first stanza and the second one is a work of art all by itself!

Exquisite Laurie, pure perfection these lines that touch the heart. Thank you. Cindy

Another beautifully evoking poem lovley write 10 +++

That evokes a scene in my head, just like in a movie. Well done Ruthy

Beautifully said Laurie...lovely poem

sometimes the past leaves us with a coldness, but within there is a warmth that lives on in our memories. a beautiful write of the past and where love takes us

beautiful read! i love this

Though brief, this is about as well written a poem as can be, Laurie. Your phrasing is exquisite in every line and your very well chosen words are tremendously effective in conveying your thoughts and emotions. There are few poets on any of these internet poetry sites whose poems are as eloquent and wonderfully written as your poems are. You are an exceptionally gifted poet. Carl.

Hauntingly beautiful, I love the line 'frost like an angel's brooch' Well versed 10 Lynda xx

this is amazing, no lie.

this piece tore me apart... grand deliverance Laurie. word

So well written that I can feel the heart ache. Ron

Something I can relate to.... well writen.