Sunday, October 26, 2014

After These Mists And Fogs Comments

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The Sun dies
With the invisible time throwing its command
The strength of red and yellow overwritten
By a red vomited from him.
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M D Dinesh Nair
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Hazel Durham 06 November 2014

Beautiful write as winter creeps up on us all the truth of cold days, as we miss the sunshine even though we complained of the heat, stunning lines that are deep and memorable!

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Kavya . 03 November 2014

a very thoughtful poem indicating about the change in seasons, which we heartily accept as we are left with no choice but to join the spinning Earth for yet another (joyful?) ride! An excellent write Sir

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Hans Vr 03 November 2014

Nice observation.The long winters and everyone longing so much for the warmth of the sun and then after 3 days of sunshine, we all tend to complain it is too hot. `Well written poem

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 03 November 2014

A quietness has to catch our poet hood. After these mists and fogs mind runs to search new vision and new direction to decorate Earth with very beautiful poem like this. Excellent writing.

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Valsa George 02 November 2014

After these mists and fogs The spinning Earth will ask us all in mischief - Are you coming for yet another ride? And we shall join her once more..... Thus the poem ends on a happy note! After the mist and fog comes bright sunshine for Nature renews itself every now and then! Great write, Dinesh!

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Saheb Mohapatra 02 November 2014

great explanation of the nature..........interesting one.....good use of words.......thanks

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