Wednesday, September 11, 2013

After The Towers Fell Comments

Rating: 4.8

I can still see their faces, in the hallways of my mind
I can still feel the traces, of the love they left behind...
As the skyline changed and the whole world was rearranged
After the towers fell, we did rise.
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Susan Lacovara
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Khairul Ahsan 25 June 2018

A solemn eulogy, that finds an echo in our hearts too. 'Yes, after the towers fell, we DID rise' - that was a collective tribute that they deserved.

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Adrian Flett 22 December 2017

What a beautiful memorial to those who fell and I love the non-sensitivity with which you handle the words. They are more powerful because of that. Thank you also for reading and commenting on my poems.

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Hamid Moghaddasi 12 May 2017

There is a strength in every weakness There is a hope in every storm Thank you dear susan. I enjoyed reading your thoughtful and lovely poem. Best Wishes Hamid Moghaddasi (Calm)

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Never to be forgotten..What a day that was and beautiful tribute your poem is..

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Elaine Macfarlane 12 May 2017

Simply a beautiful tribute, brought a tear to my eyes!

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Godfrey Morris 12 May 2017

beautifully written, thoughts brilliantly expressed. My heart goes out to New York, from a great tragedy the Rose like the Pheonix from the ashes. Great Write

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 12 May 2017

Congrats for having selected the poem as the member's poem of the day. Its an excellent tribute to those who lost lives on 09/11.

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Babatunde Aremu 12 May 2017

There is hope for a tree cut down. After a scent of water, it buds. Although the Tower was brought down, the citizens are not downcast. Great write!

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 May 2017

I still see their faces! ! ! Terror! Horror! ! Breaking the mirror of peace. (9/11) . Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tom Allport 12 May 2017

a brilliant tribute poem of lives lost in an horrific event that subsequently opened the eyes of the world? their lives will never be forgotten................well written

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Bharati Nayak 12 May 2017

I honor those who lost their lives in the events of 9/11.I also honor this great write giving tributes to the victims.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 May 2017

Reminds me of the song BOUNCE popularized by BON JOVI...a perfect 10.... I invite you to visit my NINE ELEVEN EARTHSHAKING DAY.... Thanks Ma'am Susan....

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 May 2016

Hi Susan, There is strength in every weakness There is hope in every storm Being so positive in today's world, while reliving the catastrophie, needs extreme courage. Congrats. I would like you to read my poems A Road in the Middle of Nowhere, When Shadows Reappear, both in the wake of similar inhuman cruelty. Thanks

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Ellen Shaw 14 March 2016

I read and re read this several times 'And they cannot be forgotten, And I will not look away' Sometimes all we can do is see, etch another person in our mind. Remember them, write about them, never forget them, honour them. It seems such a small thing as you wish there was more you could do, powerless to change the course of events. In reality it is the last great act of kindness, love, compassion and remembrance we can do for others.

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Brian Stafford 26 January 2015

Very touching and compelling reading, well done.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 24 June 2014

Susie, Yours is a great poem. Also you had read my 09/11 some time back and commented. Thanks very much. Even at this late stage I wanted to thank you for your views. Also, you can visualize how we Sri Lankans were facing same kind of situation as yours, for thirty solid years day in day out. Can you imagine type of atrocities those most dreadful terrorists, world's most ruthless outfit in the guise of liberation committed on this island? How many infants, kids, pregnant women, aged and clergy they simply hacked, chopped and cut in to pieces, most cruelly? No inch of the land was spared by these demons without blasting alive. Now, they hiding within your country and elsewhere, they play various other tricks too with the help of your politicians to continue this. Many do not feel or understand the kind of agony we were going through for 30 years. After finishing the menace, some leaders in the developed world are harassing us in the name of human rights and this is worse than the terrorism itself. Where ever it occurs, terrorism is terrorism. There can’t be two type as good terrorism and bad terrorism.

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Susan Wall 27 April 2014

wow that is powerful very nicely written.

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Richard Beevor 26 April 2014

Reading through your work, I believe you are fast becoming one of my favourite poets.

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Mervyn Graham 04 March 2014

I found the writing of my poem (as you have read) rather a catharsis experience as the images of that day still live with me. I was viewing from the comfort of my sofa in front of the tv safe in another country, how must Newyorkers. Once again my dear your work makes mine look like scribblings.

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Anthony Burkett 26 January 2014

Sweet and remorsefully heartfelt... with a patriotic resilience that is uncommon in today's rhetoric... your pen makes me proud to call you a fellow countryman... well done Susan!

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