Friday, October 30, 2009

After The Storm Was Gone I Now Write This Comments

Rating: 4.6

Such loud thunders of a storm have now passed
But all of these things we've surely surpassed;
No storm or typhoon can break our strong bones,
No wind or force can destroy our firm homes.
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Obed dela Cruz
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Sally Plumb Plumb 31 December 2019

A friend in a storm is very comforting.Best regards to you.

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Michael Hagwood 11 October 2014

I just like the tempo of the writeing style

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Tribhawan Kaul 11 October 2014

Very nice write indeed. Enjoyed reading this poem of the day, . Congratulations

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Leslie Philibert 11 October 2014

Fine write, maybe you need a new rhyme for the last couplet...

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Liliana ~el 11 October 2013

Really wonderful and inspiring; has a great rhythmic flow!

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Ramesh T A 11 October 2013

Most optimistic note of the poem simply captures hearts of readers, my friend! Keep on going so you will win all battles in life!

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Anita Sehgal 11 October 2012

Let's embrace this day and embrace the new sun Always remember that battles are won! After the storm was gone I now write this, I'm your friend mostly in times like this! - inspirational lines...!

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Mark Dillon 11 October 2012

Uplifting and veryb enjoyable read, thank you,

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Nurain Ali-balogun 11 October 2012

Wonderful verses, a kind of poem that lifts one's weakened spirit on his feet, and ending it with that note of support as a friend is just thoughtful. Well done.

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Yesk Nair 20 November 2011

pretty rebellious thoughts

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ian McArthur 11 December 2010

Inspirational, in a word. I really enjoyed the flow of words :) .

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Thato Maluleka 29 December 2009

beauty is in the eye of the beholder, this is a masterpiece and your the owner

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 25 November 2009

what wonderful verses! great thoughts Hope is the shine when the sky is full of clouds... keep it up! ! ! well penned poem, nice rhyme... 10+++

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Antonio Liao 10 November 2009

the wonder of life...set to follow the beginning of the day.....every dew invites the wonderful and beautiful world to a pleasing moment with God.....the Lord speaks in many events....feeling and undertaking..... a perfect reflection shows us to learn from that turmoil.....that suffering seen....from nothing to nothing, where the creation is truly made for us.... just always thanks the Lord thy God my friend....a star and a salute in your memorable poem of this century....thanks you and God bless.... a 10 +++++

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Jester's P 09 November 2009

very strong message of hope... positive in life's problems and troubles is a gift from God...indeed its true that many have died but still more will live because it is the human destiny to surpass the nature's fury with Gods love and grace. all the best...

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 08 November 2009

This is a truly great piece

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Krishnarasa Seshadri 05 November 2009

To quote my Shelley, you have suffered 'woes that Hope thinks infinite! ' and yet your 'Hope creates from its own wreck the thing it comtemplates! '....shows the strong person that you are, Obed!

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Queeny Gona 04 November 2009

The certainity in your thought that typhoon couldnt break your heart is great! The courage you took up after the storm is praise worthy my friend. may god bless you

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Philip Winchester 03 November 2009

Glad to see the words that spell out the Hope that you Inspire. You should be very Proud of yourself. Kind Regards God will I hope Provide.

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Matt Mooney 03 November 2009

A poem as personal as a whisper. What courage it takes to be true poet who has lived through the storm and floods and is now happy to celebrate life with us all again.10.

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