Saturday, November 8, 2008

After The Storm Comments

Rating: 5.0

The storm was awful fierce last night,
And even with the shutters,
There were places where a candle wouldn't light,
And some rain trickled through
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Kevin Eaglesfield
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Ron Flowers 14 December 2008

I enjoyed it. Ron

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Fay Slimm 17 November 2008

Kev. you tell a mighty good story - and this one takes the ticket...... I laughed out loud, and thanks for that...... do tell us the sequel one day..... Fay.

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Original Unknown Girl 14 November 2008

Wonderful! Reads like an excerpt from Tom Sawyers diary! (or something similar) .. really enjoyed the way you painted this picture. HG: -) xx

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Kevin Eaglesfield

Kevin Eaglesfield

Derby, England
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