Friday, May 9, 2008

After The Sonnet Ends Comments

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After the sonnet ends it begins.
The final word glistens suspended on a string
like an industrious spider on strands slender as pins,
like a trapeze artist’s precarious swing.
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Sonny Rainshine
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C Richard Miles 13 February 2009

Thanks for this great poem. It opens my mind to possibilities of the modern sonnet - you don't have to stick to iambic pentameter for it to work - makes me want to go off and experiment. Great to see a poem about poetry, too - it's a subject I often ponder.

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Bill Thomas 01 August 2008

Excellent piece again, Sonny - though with the kids I teach, most'd be lucky to hang on to the thought of a haiku to swirl round the mouth & mind all day, let alone a sonnet! Keep it up! ! !

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Gone with the wind 23 July 2008

This is so beautiful..Each word is so full of life..'after the sonnet ends, it begins' a 10... Gul

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