After The Shower- Haiku Comments

After The Shower Seamus O' Brian, To be aware of gravity and the movement of water, for it is in the force of gravity and movement that the sun does it's beautiful work. Lovely simple poem that I can enjoy. You are an excellent poet. I have yet to write a true haiku such as this. Blessings, Kathy

Lovely Haiku - seventeen syllables; seventeen gems!

Wow! ! ! ! ! A Breath Taking Haiku! ! ! ! ! Beautiful Painted! ! ! ! ! Awesome Imagery! ! ! ! ! And Beautiful Photo Too! ! ! ! ! :) Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

Beautuful poem on nature in concise. Dear Seamus, your perception on rain drops has been nicely portrayed. Thanks for sharing.

neal, i see many have commented positively on this haiku- and deservedly. cool! like many i like, i think, i've seen that- why didn't i write it? thinking of this and your longer poems, it displays your verbal nimbleness. -glen

Glistening drop of rain by catching rain on its way..... wonderful preception of the poet. thank you dear poet. tony

Seamus O' Brian, Iv'e not written a haiku. Your After the shower is a great thought provoker! I was sitting in coffee shop last week during a hail storm and sunlight was shedding its beauty in each little raindrop lens caught on the outside of the window next to me. It was stunning! Your poem brought back this image for me. Bless you. Your writing is so winsome and inspiring! Kathy

Beautiful encapsulation of thought, in a well articulated piece of poetry elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing.

A vivid imagery, falling rain drop signifies many things and portray the flow in life.....10+++

loved the surprising freshness of this poem, dripping through my soul

This haiku is interesting. It stirs the imagination with a hidden. pull to the drop on the leaf.

drop of rain glistening in the sunlight. it crawls down the branch.......... wonderful poetic expressions dear poet. thank you. tony

the words present a perfect picture in my mind of the time right after the storm - Rich

In short, with superb illustration of rain soaked tree branches.

We need the rain! Nice work.

I, to catch that falling droplet, hold it in my hand, as if a precious gem. This Haiku, a precious gem!

The picture of this scene is so vividly presented, its subtleness was captured with the grace of the little rain drop. I enjoy seeing this world through your delicate perspective.

I will return and read more of your work, Neal. I find so few truly talented writers here and I enjoy learning from them. Excellent Haiku.

Lovely haiku. Reading it brought as much pleasure as watching a raindrop fall. Thank you for sharing.