Monday, September 25, 2006

After The Rain Comments

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When the sun shines again
After a heavy shower of rain
And through the open window
You breathe in the freshly washed air
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Raul Castelan 07 June 2007

Very descriptive in this poem of yours. I like the stanza of waiting for the water to dry some more. Rain does fall and do that sometimes. It makes the person wonder what is going on up in the skies. SPLENDID JOB! ! !

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