Wednesday, January 22, 2014

After The Rain Comments

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After the rain the leaves let fall
A few explicit drops;
The sodden turf is firming up again.
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Ananta Madhavan
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Valsa George 05 August 2014

A lovely little poem! Now it is the time of monsoon showers. Here in Kerala, it is torrential rain as has never been before! So the scene described is hardly the same. Usually after a summer rain, such scenes abound. The 'ferns with their crisp serration', 'the sodden turf growing firmer again', 'a blob of rain acting as a magnifying glass to one small thought'........ all are great images!

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Lyn Paul 22 January 2014

Nicely written Thank you and welcome to poemhunter

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