Wednesday, August 15, 2012

After The Rain Comments

Rating: 4.8

A hush had descended, the air was quite still,
Nothing was moving beside the old mill;
Nature postponed both it's joys and it's pain,
Holding it's breath until after the rain.
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John Carter Brown
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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 March 2019

Nothing moves beside old mill. Everything we see through nature. The scene after rain is beautifully captured. The imagery drawn here is excellent. The season ticks with seasonal sound and we feel this well. An amazing poem is excellently penned...10

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Roseann Shawiak 10 October 2013

I can see myself looking up at the skies after a rainfall, and can smell the freshened air all around me and the colors of a rainbow. Very good imagery. Liked this one very much. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Smoky Hoss 15 September 2013

Superb imagery, I can nearly feel the scene.

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Mary Forrester 08 January 2013

Beautiful poem John, I really enjoyed reading it.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 04 January 2013

Lovely piece.

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Joseph Anderson 05 October 2012

A very refreshing write, sweetly flowing and and great with serenity. Good work John. I believe you have the touch

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Perry Biggerstaff 26 September 2012

Well done John, Fantastic imagery.

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Valerie Dohren 19 August 2012

Lovely poem John, beautifully written with great rhyming.

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Leslie Philibert 15 August 2012

This is a well crafted piece of writing - good work.

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Mark Dillon 15 August 2012

Nicely written, paints a great scene.

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