Tuesday, May 1, 2012

After The Rain Comments

Rating: 4.7

After the rain the air is sweet
With glist`ning pools beneath my feet
Raindrops dripping down from the eaves
Teardrops slipping off shining leaves
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Valerie Dohren
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2) ‘ After the rain new hope is born'… wow! What do I say!

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Excellent poem. You have great powers of observation and the aesthetic power in using expressivve images.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 March 2024

Love this so much, it has touched my innermost heart,5 Stars, excellently rhymed and so sublime, especially the last two lines

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Neela Nath Das 29 November 2023

So beautiful expression! After the rain new hope comes.Really.

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Richard Antwi 26 June 2020

After the rain I shall be whole... .....so there is hope after all.. You made my day

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Chandini Jaswal 16 August 2019

Coincidentally it was raining when I was reading this poem. The poem has captured the feeling so well! Great poem ma'am!

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Valerie Dohren 18 August 2019

Thank you for reading and for your very kind comments.

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 13 May 2019

" After the rain has kissed the earth So mother nature brings new birth " so beautiful thoughts. So nice poem 100+++++++

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Valerie Dohren 14 May 2019

Thank you Bhagabat, very much appreciate your comments.

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Miriam Hurdle 30 November 2018

Lovely poem about after the rain. I especially like the last stanza. I have written several poems about drought and rain but I have not posted them yet. I just started posting my poems today.

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Valerie Dohren 30 November 2018

Thank you for reading and commenting Miriam, much appreciated.

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Valerie Dohren 28 August 2018

Thank you for reading and commenting Sally. So pleased you enjoyed.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 26 August 2018

Lovely piece. I enjoy the rain, too.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 30 November 2017

Imaginative poem nature poem.... nice write in here

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Christopher Tye 31 October 2016

Wonderful poem, such a lovely read. Nature is truly remarkable with it's beauty and verity.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 December 2015

The display of nature with the muse of life. Nice work.

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Rajnish Manga 02 November 2015

The enchanting display of the changes taking place after the rains and the sentiments arising in its wake are just wonderful. The awesome language is simply incredible. Loved reading it. Thanks.

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Ken E Hall 03 September 2015

After the rain has touched my soul...you write this lovely poem, nothing like the garden after rain and the magic aroma it leaves...you capture the scene so perfect...thanks and regrards

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Bharati Nayak 27 August 2015

After the rain comes a fresh dawn After the rain new hope is born After the rain has touched my soul After the rain I shall be whole - - - -Rain washes away the gloom filling with new hope, a new dawn.A stunningly beautiful write.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 April 2015

What a beautiful garden you portray.

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Tony Adah 30 January 2015

......after the rain I shall be whole. Good rendition. Love it n thx for sharing

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Perry Biggerstaff 03 June 2014

Very nice Valerie...as always!

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Marianne Soher 28 December 2013

Yes Val...so good to read you!

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