certain stillness up above
harmony after raindrop
birds start singing again
trees dripping wet; clean
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Great imagery here Manonton. I love the smell of the earth after the rain. Everything is washed clean and fresh.
With rain a lot of changes happen in Nature. Leaves grow greener, flowers bloom, birds begin singing again and everyone feels fresh! A lovely write!
This is wonderful poem of yours as you mentioned about the beauty around to notice and to pen down, very nice poem.
Beautiful Poem, I can feel and see the freshness after rain.. nostalgia hitting.. I remember the rain in Seattle.. though I come from the rain monsoon country I haven't seen rain like that I saw in Seattle, light, gentle, unrelenting, .. thanks for sharing
Verily, a poem full of imagery and freshness that touches the soul...10 I invite you to read my poems
An interesting acheivement. The gradual progression into rhyming couplets makes me think of a dropp of water steadily flowing into a trickle and then a stream, growing with the swell of water... though I may be completely wrong! Even if I am I still thoroughly enjoyed it so well done x
Despite gloomy clouds in the sky, we will find the way to sunshine...... And we shall bath in the sunshine-after the rain. :)
...thanks for your comment... ...your poem is touching.every line .just like our life..after so many trials...there's happiness waiting ahead of us......
The imagery of this poem is universal. Beautiful composition.
I can see you got an excellent poetical style and a fresh rhythm of your heart. Keep writing and sharing this wonderful poem. take care, melvin
a nice refreshing poem of nature doing her best to clean and quench the things that she loves......well written.