Thursday, November 26, 2009

After The Night Comments

Rating: 4.8

After the sunrise had lighten up the morning sky
I hung my head and began to cry
My girl was gone, left in the night
I didn’t know why, could’ve just told me out right
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Robbie Squires
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Romeo Della Valle 12 October 2011

Sad but nevertheless, well penned and poignant! I love its rich imagery and fine texture! 10+++ Keep inspiring the Poetry World with more of those talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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dymon sidebottom 28 November 2009

nice write. kinda sad but i really liked it

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 28 November 2009

its a sad poem though, she shouldn't have left you for that someone... good write...

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Kassiah Gervaise 27 November 2009

a very sweet sad touching poem.i loved it stay with the good work.

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Robbie Squires

Robbie Squires

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