After The Gold Rush Comments

This is sobering. It was a lesson hard won as a child. Every time somebody stole something of my treasure, I was so shocked. But weren't we supposed to be following the Golden Rule? But finally I got savvy: Oh I get it; we are only paying lip service to that outmoded rule..lol. Loved the repetition, bringing home the main theme.

a bold but true poem 10

Your words are well chosen and the idea is very unique and expressed in an amazing way. I really enjoied reading it till the very last word, the title caught my attention. the underlying meaning behind the words is brilliant. Lovely piece of art