Tuesday, May 3, 2005

After The Deluge Comments

Rating: 4.8

There's a blue harmony to Summer rain,
Its subtle rhythm suits the mood I'm in,
A pulsing tempo, a liquid refrain
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James Mills
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Beautiful villanelle - well done Jimmy!

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Ivy Christou 03 May 2005

this is just amazing James.. it is almost lyrical and very beautifully written.. well done HBH

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