After The Dawn Comments

Nice writing, I always learn something

Nice Write Nice Flow Like a Cascade...,

This is all absolutly true and beautifully written. The worst part is knowing that we do hope that there will be an exception without thinking of the consequenses.

The tragedy is that some live and never come to this understanding. It is a powerful perspective that teaches personal responsibility. Excellently expressed Lady Butterfly!

Great poem my friend and it's so true, every single word.