Tuesday, September 29, 2015

After The Big Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

And so the big day started at the crack of early dawn
With not so much a whimper, as a great enormous yawn
We felt that the front doorbell, was on fast repeat
As countless people then arrived, and parked there in the street
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 29 September 2015

Verily, a heart touching poem, It makes me think, how relations play a role in our lives.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 September 2015

Very interesting poem you have shared here. Remembering each moment will give hours of joy and bliss. Reading you after such along gap here is still correlative. Nice and wise poem shared....10

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