Friday, August 29, 2008

After The Battle Comments

Rating: 4.9

Alas! , the raging battle's done
And morning once again has come
As stillness swathes the bleak horizon o'er
The place where echoes come to strum
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Jean Mallette
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Nathaniel Booker 01 September 2008

Very unique and rhythmic style of writing you have as it holds all readers until the last melodic flutter. Be Well N8

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Keith Foley 01 September 2008

Nicely said (if anything can be said nicley about a battle/war) . Liked it over all very much. Felt carried away at times. nice tallent. keep sharring. Keith

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Greenwolfe 1962 30 August 2008

I gave it a nine because there were things here and there that were not always the best, but overall I thought this was a piece worth reading more than once. That's all it takes. GW62

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A sad poem...Oh, how I hate war...

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John Nightingale 30 August 2008

A sombre piece. Good work.

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Kris Smith 30 August 2008

Yes very well written excellent content and well penned Chris 10 thanks

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Danny Reynolds 30 August 2008

I don't know why, but there seems to a Scottishness to this piece. (That is a compliment.) Danny

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Ron Flowers 29 August 2008

This is very good poetry. It gets a 10 from me. Ron

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Great! keep it coming!

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Jean Mallette

Jean Mallette

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