... taste of a kiss, it lingers, like a syrup
on the edge of lips, like a harsh insight
that burns a slow void, on the fingertips, to depths
unknown at first, in flesh parts of the heart
...
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This is stunning, I absolutely love it, you've captured here perfectly that feeling that is so difficult to express but so exquisite is it's sweetness. I love the metaphors you've used, gives it a stylish classy quality. HG: -) xx
Frank, this is a great work. Rich. I like the flow and the style.
I could almost taste it. Certainly brings back the memory of those gentle bites in years and lovers past. How lovely and so beautifully written. Wow!