After Sixty Eight Years Oh My Super Moon! !
Awww- your brightest face
Smiled at me
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A lovely write. You nailed it. Don't we all feel the same way to witness a super moon? Moon has this strange fascination for us. I wish we had super moons more frequently. It breaks the monotony of routine n brings out the poet in us.
lovely poem. Moon is always so fascinating specially when it is a full moon invoking so much of creativity. I too remember watching that super moon.
Very interesting write...last super moon must have been very extra exciting as it was the time, a year after india's independence...great work 10++++
I love the nonchalant way in which the poem it is written; and I myself remember that day, when I saw the moon so close, as if I could almost touch it, so close, so bright, so beautiful. A lovely poem!
Hi, Bharati! Hoping this finds you well in all ways... I don’t think the moon shall ever fail to fascinate us, especially when so large and full. -Glen
Lovingly captured in a poem, though I had never seen it, your fine lines took me there. Thanks Geeta
People caught supermoon in camera, computer; but in poem by the Poetess is heart-wrenching.10
To catch a scoop! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
The moon is an oft studied subject in the world of poetry. The super moon magnifies a poet's love for the celestial. Your poem shows how close you feel to your moon, a constant companion that illuminates darkness and brings clarity. Your love and appreciation is evident. I love your twist when you write, 'sometimes I wonder / If I am gone from your skies/' This life and our role in it is a wonder...like a Super Moon! Thanks.
One can see such a super moon only once in his life. On 26th January,1948 I was only three, I might have seen it but truly even if I saw it, I had been starring at the face of my mother.
Great imagery! The Supermoon is wonderfully described with powerful poetic imagination… “As if I would touch you if I make a jump dance’….Eagerness to perceive the age defying supermoon with dazzling gold dress has been one of the most elegant components of this beautiful poem! A great piece of poetry! !
Wow, a great reminiscent dialogue with the ageless moon.Lovely poem with so nice imageries.Thanks 10++++ Subhas
With great imagery you have woven a beautiful poem. Enjoyed.
An amazing poem that expresses in detail the beauty and wonders of the supermoon. Gteat piece.
To see how would you / Walk, donning your / Dazzling gold dress / Every one was trying / To catch a scoop full / Of your light- - - - - - - - - - - - - - ] I swear these are the loveliest lines ever written about the moon! ! ! ! ! The rest of the poem continues in this gorgeous way. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++