Monday, December 18, 2017

After Sixty Eight Years Oh My Super Moon Comments

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After Sixty Eight Years Oh My Super Moon! !

Awww- your brightest face
Smiled at me
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Bharati Nayak
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Susan Williams 13 April 2018

To see how would you / Walk, donning your / Dazzling gold dress / Every one was trying / To catch a scoop full / Of your light- - - - - - - - - - - - - - ] I swear these are the loveliest lines ever written about the moon! ! ! ! ! The rest of the poem continues in this gorgeous way. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Nosheen Irfan 14 January 2018

A lovely write. You nailed it. Don't we all feel the same way to witness a super moon? Moon has this strange fascination for us. I wish we had super moons more frequently. It breaks the monotony of routine n brings out the poet in us.

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Savita Tyagi 12 January 2018

lovely poem. Moon is always so fascinating specially when it is a full moon invoking so much of creativity. I too remember watching that super moon.

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Indira Renganathan 10 January 2018

Very interesting write...last super moon must have been very extra exciting as it was the time, a year after india's independence...great work 10++++

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 January 2018

I love the nonchalant way in which the poem it is written; and I myself remember that day, when I saw the moon so close, as if I could almost touch it, so close, so bright, so beautiful. A lovely poem!

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Glen Kappy 06 January 2018

Hi, Bharati! Hoping this finds you well in all ways... I don’t think the moon shall ever fail to fascinate us, especially when so large and full. -Glen

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Loke Kok Yee 05 January 2018

Lovingly captured in a poem, though I had never seen it, your fine lines took me there. Thanks Geeta

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Bichitra Anand 01 January 2018

People caught supermoon in camera, computer; but in poem by the Poetess is heart-wrenching.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 December 2017

To catch a scoop! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jette Blackstone 30 December 2017

The moon is an oft studied subject in the world of poetry. The super moon magnifies a poet's love for the celestial. Your poem shows how close you feel to your moon, a constant companion that illuminates darkness and brings clarity. Your love and appreciation is evident. I love your twist when you write, 'sometimes I wonder / If I am gone from your skies/' This life and our role in it is a wonder...like a Super Moon! Thanks.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 December 2017

One can see such a super moon only once in his life. On 26th January,1948 I was only three, I might have seen it but truly even if I saw it, I had been starring at the face of my mother.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 December 2017

Great imagery! The Supermoon is wonderfully described with powerful poetic imagination… “As if I would touch you if I make a jump dance’….Eagerness to perceive the age defying supermoon with dazzling gold dress has been one of the most elegant components of this beautiful poem! A great piece of poetry! !

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 December 2017

Wow, a great reminiscent dialogue with the ageless moon.Lovely poem with so nice imageries.Thanks 10++++ Subhas

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Anil Kumar Panda 19 December 2017

With great imagery you have woven a beautiful poem. Enjoyed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 December 2017

An amazing poem that expresses in detail the beauty and wonders of the supermoon. Gteat piece.

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