Thursday, January 16, 2014

After Six Beers Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was tired and feeling quite thirsty
so I walked to the nearest bar,
where I met this peculiar woman
who was looking a shade under par.
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Thomas Vaughan Jones
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Anthony Burkett 05 February 2014

I laugh out Loud! ! ! Hoping you didn't have to chew your arm off in the effort not to wake her! OH! My word! I'm crying with laughter! If I ever have the opportunity... I want to buy you a pint... or six... for that one! : -D

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Adeline Foster 19 January 2014

Comedy of Errors indeed. I truly enjoyed it. Read mine with perhaps her twin - Idle Folly - Adeline

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Lorraine Colon 17 January 2014

Yes, I too am so glad to have discovered your jovial spirit expressed in your wonderful poetry.

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Joseph Anderson 17 January 2014

You should have saved some beer for the morn. This is a real gut buster.Thomas, I am very happy to have found you and shall be looking at you. A well penned comedy of errors

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