Thursday, July 9, 2009

'' After...Shocks'' Comments

Rating: 3.9

HURRICANES AND TORNADOES ARE MADE 4 DESTRUCTION..
and earthquakes crumble each mans' construction
blizzards with the frost bitten snow, leave us homeless out in the cold
EARTHQUAKES, beget tremors, that seem to last 4ever
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Olympia Melone 11 December 2009

i am not really a poetry person, but i read intertwined souls, and became hooked on your writings...so i will read as many as i can, and rate em, and comment..if you could do me a huge favor, and suggest a couple of poets you like too...10s

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Vijay Menon 30 September 2009

a very powerful poem

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Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate 25 September 2009

a sad story so powerfully penned...well said

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Surya . 14 August 2009

beautiful poem. fantastic imagery.voted10 surya

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Something Special 14 August 2009

a brilliant detailed poem of the pain we feel after a break-up

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Marieta Maglas 19 July 2009

nice piece, well penned with interesting ideas.....

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Lady Grace 10 July 2009

the last stanza reveals the summary of all the stanzas mentioned above...grace

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Poetic Soul 09 July 2009

I like this poem, it's full of emotions.10+++++++.

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