i watch as she walks away
my head hurts
my heart hurts
all of me hurts
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such a great poem it fits me perfect wish i had the words to express my breakup....i dont but you did for me thanks
this is a very good poem full of passion and you made me feel so sorry for you....... would you like to come and read 'The Rose'? I'll post it in a moment.... Ruth: -)
I felt the pain in your words...you have touched me. That is what poetry is about. Good job. Anna
You describe a pain unlike any other. It may not be the worst kind of pain, but boy does it hurt! We feel so lost, alone, a sense of failure. You said it all in your poem. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
This gives me the same sad feeling as the song entitled, 'She's out of my life', by michael jackson. Very well written poem. Thanks for sharing.
true to every man who has loved & lost what we don't understand & why.
very well-written..... something i am afraid of experiencing..