Thursday, August 13, 2009

After She Walked Out The Door Comments

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i watch as she walks away
my head hurts
my heart hurts
all of me hurts
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graham russell
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 20 January 2010

very well-written..... something i am afraid of experiencing..

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Frank Hamon 21 November 2009

such a great poem it fits me perfect wish i had the words to express my breakup....i dont but you did for me thanks

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Ruth Walters 16 August 2009

this is a very good poem full of passion and you made me feel so sorry for you....... would you like to come and read 'The Rose'? I'll post it in a moment.... Ruth: -)

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Annabel Sheila 14 August 2009

I felt the pain in your words...you have touched me. That is what poetry is about. Good job. Anna

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Marilyn Lott 13 August 2009

You describe a pain unlike any other. It may not be the worst kind of pain, but boy does it hurt! We feel so lost, alone, a sense of failure. You said it all in your poem. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Rage Allay 13 August 2009

This gives me the same sad feeling as the song entitled, 'She's out of my life', by michael jackson. Very well written poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Douglas Mcantagart 13 August 2009

true to every man who has loved & lost what we don't understand & why.

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