Monday, November 3, 2014

After Sex Comments

Rating: 5.0

Slightly offended by shortness of it,
Looks at himself in her eyes.
Heavenly better than 'beating the meat',
And hellishly strident were cries.
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Lev Brekhman
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Dr Antony Theodore 05 July 2017

hellishly strident were cries. Somebody weak, by tragedies maimed? His life must be surely a mess. Emotions indescribable……… you are trying to put it into a poem. Psycholgoical, physical, emotional and in the feeling level your poem has a great value Thank you dear poet. tony

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