After Parting Comments
Oh I have sown my love so wide
That he will find it everywhere;
It will awake him in the night,
It will enfold him in the air.
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I set my shadow in his sight And I have winged it with desire, That it may be a cloud by day And in the night a shaft of fire. excellent..
Yes, she has cast her net and I am ensnared, By day her cloud surrounds me, And, by night I am sleep impaired. HRL
I think this is a very innovative poem in terms of content. Love here is tangible, i.e. wide, shaft of fire, etc. The ending is quite a startling image. The form of the poem is an excellent use of traditional versification.
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7/17/2025 9:14:17 PM # 1.0.0
A wonderful poem of love so beautifully crafted and executed