After Many Years Comments

This is very very good, I can relate to this very much... You have used so much vivid imagery that you can actually see the dimly lighted room with shadows of a small table for two off to the side, with two old flames trying to find the whys, and what ifs.... Very touching, and heartfelt.....You have a wonderfull way with expressing your inner emotions... Bonnie

A very nice work with imagination. Lovely composition. As if we can see what is happening after many years from a short distance! 10+

Such softness in these lines, mixing nostalic and pleasing thoughts to dreams/hopes of a free talk. Thanks for sharing!

That evening You had done all that For me And that you will tell me So many other things of your past Because that was your past alone It could never have been our past what a lovely thought...just lie there on the rug..in front of a fireplace...and listen to crackling sound of wood burning and the past.....

I find it an internal monologue…with a smooth flow and lining a soft romance…