Friday, January 3, 2003

After Long Drought Comments

Rating: 3.6

After long drought, commotion in the sky;
After dead silence, thunder. Then it comes,
The rain. It slashes leaves, and doubly drums
On tin and shingle; beats and bends awry
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Mark Van Doren
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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 April 2024

The poem revolves around the anticipation and arrival of rain after a prolonged period of drought. The poem beautifully depicts the transformation from barren silence to life-giving precipitation.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 April 2024

Once again CONGRATS being chosen as The Modern Poem Of The Day. I repeat my own response now:

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 March 2024

CONGRATS being chosen by PoemHunter and Team as the Modern Poem Of The Day.5 Stars!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 March 2024

D) Most deserving poem as The Modern Poem Of The Day! TOP Marks 5 Stars

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 March 2024

C) However, the poem also recognizes the complexity of desire: how even desired things can evoke fear. The last lines suggest that the mind remembers moments of silence and contemplation best.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 March 2024

B) The rain breaking the silence, cutting away leaves and drumming on surfaces give a sense of relief and renewal. The arrival of the rain disturbs the silence and rejuvenates the parched earth. The reference to bees among chrysanthemums and asters brings back memories of vibrant summers.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 March 2024

A) The poem revolves around the anticipation and arrival of rain after a prolonged period of drought. The poem beautifully depicts the transformation from barren silence to life-giving precipitation.

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Chinedu Dike 22 January 2023

An insightful creation nicely put together with beautiful rhyme scheme

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 22 January 2023

After long something bad or good comes something reverse (viceversa) ; nice to read the poem

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M Asim Nehal 13 January 2016

Nice lines.. The whole world dreamed of this, and has it now. Nor was the waking easy. The dull root Is jealous of its death; the sleepy brow Smiles in its slumber; and a heart can fear The very flood it longed for, roaring near. The spirit best remembers being mute.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 January 2016

Amazing narration of plight during drought and sigh of relief and awe due to thunder storm and heavy rains at the end of it's lengthy spell. Thanks for sharing.

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Daniel Richmond 18 September 2014

This is amazing, did they really have droughts before global warming?

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 18 September 2014

Through Drought, poet painted the agony of life and post happiness as thunder, rain and......

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Soren Svenson 27 November 2005

i had to recite this at school...i fell in love with it...j.i.

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