Wednesday, June 12, 2013

After It Rained! Comments

Rating: 4.6

Roof-tops quickened
by juvenile shouts
kites are flying
against the sky
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Shahzia Batool
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Beach Girl 07 September 2013

An absolutely beautiful poem Shahzia! Loved the verse 'kites are flying against the sky drawing strokes of brilliant art.' So very descriptive, I could just picture all the colors. Gave it a 10!

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2013

Wow..Wonderful write..Loved it.. How come I missed this beautiful write...

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Sun Shine 30 August 2013

A++: P allaaa poem... great write..

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Chandana Khan 25 July 2013

witnessed the same image.very lovely.10

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Ramesh Rai 08 July 2013

beautiful write enjoyed your write especially when it is raining now

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All what all of us see and hear is just a blessing of god.Yes the magical rain too.here the poet says, the deep and deep affectionate love and care on his unique creation the earth.the rain here only a symbol that says how we can change this world peace and treaty

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Sun Shine 18 June 2013

canvas sky and artist breeze

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Passionate Reader 15 June 2013

It’s lovely and rich in vocabulary! ! ! You have painted the whole picture so beautifully :)

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Valsa George 14 June 2013

Life resurrected, after it rained! It briefs all! A lovely poem! !

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Neela Nath Das 13 June 2013

A terrific picture it is! So vivid.

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Indira Babbellapati 13 June 2013

Beautiful lady, but tell me, do I need to say this after ur laughter came down as first showers?

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Farah Ilyas 13 June 2013

Aw what a scene of awaited rain has been composed by u, well done...a good diet to nourish the reader's mind

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Heather Wilkins 13 June 2013

after the rain everything is refreshed and new. lvely images.

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Wahab Abdul 13 June 2013

life resurrected after it rained what a lovely thought..as if i got relief from unbearable hot......loved it...

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Anita Sehgal 13 June 2013

beautifully brought out.. loved it!

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R.k Das 13 June 2013

:) the poem is raining with such beautiful images typical to rainy season, , , very observant poet and poem, , 'life resurrected.after it rained.. rain, , another name of life, , :)

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David Wood 13 June 2013

I love the smell of the earth after it has rained and watching the bird shake off the rain fall.

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Saadat Tahir 13 June 2013

beautiful lines celebrating the arrival of much awaited rain. not a word outa place....lovely write superb read blessings in the rain drops

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Payal Parande 12 June 2013

Look deep into nature, and then you will understand everything better. Albert Einstein felt like i was the one who was experiencing it......brilliant ma'am

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 June 2013

life resurrected after it rained Beautiful development leading to the end. Please read my poem 'Drought Go Away' when you have time. Thank you.

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