After It Rained Comments
Soon after the sky had shed her liquid sorrow
when dark clouds quickly vanished
it looked so immaculate, spotlessly blue
When the noise of cosmic hiss subsided
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Well I picture this scene, Valsa, and the feeling it brought on for you. Two of my own poems come to mind—Snail Mornings and Semi-retired in Early Spring. The inspiration we find in nature! Do you know Gerard Manley Hopkins’ sonnet God’s Grandeur? Glen
Thank you for filling my heart with tiny silver droplets of joy with this wonderful poem. You remind us of the beauty of nature under our feet that we might so easily pass by without noticing.
I am indeed pleased to get this rain at last as the country is coming closer to winter's spell now....Valsa...... I wish I could imagine and write like you........Full credit.... though I am posting belated notes.....Valsa.....Your poems are always shiny irrespective of late visit or early visit to your poem's paradise...
Dragonflies performing a ballet in the air Keen observation shows many marvels in nature. Beautifully penned.
Thank you so much sir! These days it rains profuse! The interval between rains with bright sunshine is so pleasant!
Serenic beauty very well captured After It Rained..... While suspended raindrops fell on ones heart giving a way to joyful song. Loved it from your pen Valsa.
Thank you Geetha! Yes, it was a beautiful experience and and the refreshed face of Mother Earth was a joy to behold!
I'm so glad you spilled the shiny silver droplets of joy on us with this poem, Valsa. A very refreshing poem.
A spellbinding write, full of the sights and sounds of nature, exquisite it all of its many details with feeling and beauty growing stronger with each word.
Thank you so much Captain.....! You lovely comment is an unexpected sweet surprise to me!
A beautiful after maths of the after rains and that too in a lovely style of description that is always associated with Valsa George.
Thank you so much Akhtar ji fo this compliment! I am greatly delighted on getting this comment from a highly imaginative poet like you.....
In that quiet when dream and life coalesced I saw the leaves trembling in the cold Dragonflies performing a ballet in the air Their wings catching glints of sunlight Spiders moving round crystal studded webs Repairing the broken filaments of their gossamer And birds from trees taking off into the sky- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -YES! ! ! ! ! These details are so vivid so real so true that I am standing there witnessing the dragonflies, spiders, and birds doing their thing in the respite from the wind..... just as we return to our daily chores after scrambling under cover from a chaotic downpour of rain or 50 mph windstorm. You are a terrific poet with such a fine and discriminating eye for the details that strengthen and vividly illustrate your work! Awesome, my friend. 10
I feel so overwhelmed with joy reading your comment! To hear such sweet words from you is indeed a boost to me! I agree with one thing you have mentioned as my merit....! I have an eye for detail, especially in matters connected with Nature! Thank you Susan for the great recognition you have given! Your encouragement is so uplifting!
Awesome drop. The wonder of nature after a brief spell captured beautifully. Enjoyed. Thanks for posting.
Beautiful! Nature's beauty is Mesmerizing and to pour all that joy that it brings to you and share it with your poetry with us is just awesome. Thanks for sharing.
Happy to have received your comment after a period of silence! All of us are busy. These days I hardly get time to read the poems of my friends! Once in a while I post a poem to be in touch with all! Glad you liked it Savita! Thanks a lot!
Awesome imagery. You capture the spirit of rain so well. Rain lifts up our spirits like anything. The reader is soaked in the beauty of the picture you create here. A 10.
Thank you Nosheen for your appreciative comment and the high rating given to the poem!
Beautiful images capturing the richness and crispness post heavy rainfall. Everything suddenly bursts alive with activity as the world steps from her shower and glows in her new clean colors.I love how your pen captures the light and beauty in the ballet of your poems.
Thank you Simone for finding time to read and comment on many of y poems when you yourself don't have enough time to write and post poems! I feel much obliged to you!
Dark cloud quickly vanished and her liquid sorrow went away. Spotless blue sky appeared before and vision was clearly made. Dream and life coalesced. Leaves trembled in coldness. The beauty of nature amazed mind. Light blazoned suddenly and suspended raindrops glittered. Droplets of joy were painted in heart and soul. A great imagery is drawn in this excellently penned poem...10
humming the lyrics of a half forgotten song... very very beautiful. one can enjoy rain reading this poem. beautifully expressed pleasant feelings
Soon after rain when there is a soothing coolness in the air, it is pleasant to go for a walk to see the plants and leaves washed clean and the little creatures bustling with activity! Thank you Muhammed!
Marvelous poetry with perfect expressions, rain does indeed bring to life, as the raindrops are suspended in the spiders web, your words are suspended in poetry glittering for all to see with approval! Great poetry here! ! !
Bill, I am so pleased to get such a high appraisal for my poem from you! Thank you so much!
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7/27/2025 8:19:08 AM # 1.0.0
I sat down slowly absorbing all the emotions brought forth in this riveting write.Every line touching me as you took me through on this fascinating journey, the details will be stuck with me for some time to come. Thanks Valsa.