Wednesday, April 25, 2007

After Image Comments

Rating: 5.0

What’s absent in the picture counts
as much as what is present and portrayed.
Like unvoiced words we can’t pronounce,
its lasting after-image does not fade,
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gershon hepner
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A thought provoking write, I like the first two lines; What’s absent in the picture counts as much as what is present and portrayed. best regards, jdh

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Reshma Ramesh 10 October 2008

wow........i loved this one...........hats off! ! i will be back to read more....there is so much iam like a child excited at finding a treasure! !

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 September 2008

Great thought............beautiful words.....

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Chitra - 14 July 2008

very well worded, lucid flow

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Michael Fischer 02 May 2007

Nicely done. It flows very well and 'but leaves, like words you can’t pronounce' was a solid line. Ten out of ten on this one! -Michael

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