Thursday, January 7, 2016

After Exercise 'iron Maiden' Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our APC's come lumbering off the hills
where deer go through the air like arrows
and foxes, furtive, insolent and rash
come out to saunter by the iron tracks
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Roy Ballard
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Margaret O Driscoll 08 January 2016

'Foxes, furtive, insolent, and rash', 'grind relentlessly and gash and groove' such a lot in this piece, wonder what became of Helen?

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 January 2016

Worthy for battle but not good for roads, ..Very wonderful expression shared.10

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