After Eternity. Comments

wonderful metaphorical expression suggesting the happiness: Did you know I parcel every daytime shower from early skies so tightly that there becomes by eventide only rainbowing arcs of love's tenderest colour abiding, excellent lyric poem 10/10 from Mari

works your life well; enda your noon well; falls your evening well....after eternity, what have we got, what ends well? Fay, this is what poetry gives me, all that I haven't got, and can't get. except 'after eternity.' This is transcendental. Again, happy New Year, Fay mark

fay this is great! ny man would be lucky to have you 10

super fine poem fay. just lovely

super fine fay.. i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee