Friday, March 25, 2005

After Erratic Encounters Comments

Rating: 5.0

I woke, awkwardly
in the dim light of morning
to find the world hushed in newborn snow.
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Amberlee Carter
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Michael Gale 01 June 2006

I must say that you have a well way with words. You sling them to paper or screen as easily as a hash cook slings his eggs and bacon upon the griddle. Your words land with amazing accuracy in meaning and depth. Yes this does rate a definite ten. God bless and best regards-Michael Jeffrey Gale.

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Uriah Hamilton 15 June 2005

your poems always send me reeling!

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Janice M Pickett 25 March 2005

Amberlee...That was so clear and so darn accurate...Every womans dread. The morning after. Very well written. Just watch your spellings. Theres a couple worth going back and changing. I think this is worthy of ten so thats what I gave you. Hugs Jan

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kenneth william snow 25 March 2005

Amberlee, You cram more life into one night and one poem than I do in years and volumes. I sincerely hope that one day you encounter a soul mate worthy of your talent and genius. All th best, Kenneth

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Michael Shepherd 25 March 2005

Perfectly caught...respect.

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