Sunday, October 26, 2014

After Diwali! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Festival of Lights are gone
All the lamps cleaned and kept aside
Waiting for its next arrival.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 30 October 2014

In every heart Diwali sprinkles happiness and festival of lights goes away but shows light in life. The path blooms in light. Excellent poem in valley.

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Valsa George 28 October 2014

Festival did lit my heart with light Which I am going to keep it burning bright Till next Diwali! When the fanfare of the festival is over, you have sat in silence and have taken great resolutions! Very good poem! Enjoyed!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 27 October 2014

Festival did lit my heart with light Which I am going to keep it burning bright Till next Diwali! nice composition....Geetha.......inspiring and cheering scripted with beautiful words

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 27 October 2014

Festival did lit my heart with light Which I am going to keep it burning bright Till next Diwali! nice composition....Geetha.......inspiring and cheering scripted with beautiful words

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Salini Nair 27 October 2014

A rest day for the moon. ......................its fantastic...enjoyed reading.....................

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 26 October 2014

Nice write..festival of light gone but the festival of light should gleam it must be preserved.. festival is what a kind of symbolism to correct nice

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Tajudeen Shah 26 October 2014

Dear poet, before I read and write a review, kindly note a slip of your typing, where you intended to say 'quite', it turned 'quiet'. if was not intentional, please check. rgds. eg. in the two wonderful and sensible reviews made on my verses. hope you won't mind me brought to your attention.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 October 2014

Yes, Christmas and New Year are on its way! Let me turn page and write something for my New Year resolutions! Nice idea.

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Saheb Mohapatra 26 October 2014

KEEP ALIVE THE AROMA OF DIWALI...............IN DIWALI WE LIGHT OUR HEART............nice messages from your outstanding poem.......good one

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Asit Kumar Sanyal 26 October 2014

Nice poem. It explains the post Diwali situation along with Indian culture, system and customs. Thanks for sharing it.

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Gajanan Mishra 26 October 2014

burning bright till next, right..

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

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