Monday, June 1, 2009

After Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

Now while my lips are living
Their words must stay unsaid
And will my soul remember
To speak when I am dead
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Christabelle Marinelarena
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Ency Bearis 01 June 2009

interesting one...you got the point...well done...10

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Charmaine Sinclair 01 June 2009

A bit like Dickinson...I like its effective shortness. To confine something into a few lines is a talent to be proud of.

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Barbara Terry 01 June 2009

Interesting Christabelle. But it is true, because if we don't say it aloud while we are living, nobody will hear us after we are dead and gone. A very deep, interesting write. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barara

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