Sunday, March 5, 2023

After Death ~ Comments

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Every year when the leaves fall upon my tomb
and the ants will take 'em away
then the birds will take it to build the nest.
a new life will begin at the top of the shaft.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Nabakishore Dash 07 March 2023

Excellent philosophy.

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Anjandev Roy 07 March 2023

This is an absolute gem.....thank u, dear friend...

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Richard Wlodarski 06 March 2023

A life-affirming poem about death. Absolutely brilliant, my doctor friend!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 March 2023

I won't be there to witness this all....................the undeniable truth! Appreciated this brilliant poem!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 06 March 2023

Many lives, many souls, each with a different story. Beautifully penned......10 + To my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 06 March 2023

Fabulous poem Asim ji. We all go through such thoughts about death. But we can find no concrete answers for it.

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Deepak S S 05 March 2023

We all keep guessing about death and a life after death and this one is wonderful in its own way.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 05 March 2023

Asim this is a brilliant write Top 5

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A poem with novel line of thought. "the life I've lived will not be different from the life they're going to live"… till eternity, this cycle continues.. lovely poem

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M. Asim Nehal

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