After Death Comments

The Final Day when others will speak out and I shall not.Inevitable.None can escape, Very nice poem.

The Final Day when others will speak and I shall not.Inevitable.None can escape, Very nice poem.

Great lines! A work of an intricate mind. Witty, thought provoking, clear, focused and factual. A brilliant creation Tribhawan. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

Dear sir, you have so nicely and astutely inscribed the events after death. Beautiful poem really. Lately I congratulated you for this poem selected as the member poem of the day. Thank u very much.

Do you let threats of eternal torment in Hell dominate your life? There is a way out. God is a just God. What did God take away from you that He didn't give you, therefore, being a just God, that He owes you back? He owes you back your previous eternal nonexistence. At your Judgement before Him, if you want it, ask for your eternal nonexistence back. God, being a just God, will give you your eternal nonexistence back. Then, you will never suffer again.

Marvelous re-construction of a sad scene on the death of a person reflecting the hypocrisy of people who otherwise appear to be our well wishers. Great poem. Thanks. a departed soul watching curiously from the above a body below

A departed soul! ' Rest in peace '. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Love the lesson in this poem. All brought together, but all bearing different sentiments towards the decease. So realistic. Well written.

I like your voice throughout the poem. It does chop and change or lose itself direction. Well done.

The wish to be the whole. Yes, that´s its Karma - after...from a body below.

Congrats.Death is inevitable.You have depicted the picture very nicely.

congrats. a well written poem on a sad subject. selection is well deserved,

Death scares people, but it's greatly a big subject. True feelings and emotions.

congratulations on being selected for today's honor..nice poem but death is always a sad subject to write about...and mourners, too..

Very nice poem. glad to be able to read it as member poem.

Many many congratulations! ! !

Nicely written poem...Congratulations! ! !

Very nice and apt in describing funeral episodes. Thanks for sharing

Congrats' on being chosen 'Poem of the Day'. Well-deserved and great topic!

Like this too, even though the syntax is sometimes very `original`, well done.