Tuesday, October 14, 2008

After All These..... Comments

Rating: 4.6

After all these time
I am standing here right by your side
After all these pain you caused me
After all these tears you made me shed
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Little Sunshine
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Mifael Llauderes 04 December 2008

a very affecting one... well written.

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Anjali Sinha 01 November 2008

after all these lines-- I knew I would love this poem ++++++++++10 regards anju

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 October 2008

After all this is a lovely poem! so much love here! how you cherish a lot love in your heart! ++++++10

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Tia Maria 15 October 2008

Never become a martyr for love - for then it is not true love. I pray the person who this story is about discovers the safe place of reciprocated love :) 10/10 for making my heart ache for I have been there :)

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Yasser Koor 15 October 2008

i don't know what can i say, first it is great poem and full of emotion, , strong emotion 2nd, and that what i don't understand how can you have a big heart like yours, i know the love must be like that but must be sharing between lovers not only u. anyway it is great poem as i said, weel-done cheers

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Ency Bearis 14 October 2008

deep in emotion it is expressed well..great piece...well done..A10 Ency Bearis

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 October 2008

Love can not be a one way thing, it's got to be both ways or it's just a dream... Andy 10

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Serenity Prayer 14 October 2008

very sweet. i love it. awesome job. its very passionate and i understand your feelings very clearly. fanastic job! !

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<font color=black>Nagourta 14 October 2008

Your poetry makes me sad, but I like to experience that emotion and it is good that your poetry can make me do that, for I am hardly ever sad anymore. That sounds a bit bizarre but it is true, so thank you for sharing your emotions.

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