After All These Years Comments

Passionate thoughts filled with love, eloquently expressed.

Not bad, but lacks metaphores

Sooner or later, Moving can be an option when were older, Or by force from a parent or two, But I hope we'll be in each others heart...............................long longing deep by reminiscence, , , , , , , quite passionate by eloquence, yet ingenious and poignant in feeling by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

These lines brighten up this poem: 'After all these years, I haven't been with you, You were always on my mind, Everytime I see a happy face of another.' All happy faces remind us of the original happiness - don't they?